Comments on: Assessment for Twins at War Arrived https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/ Writer. Indie Author. Ghostwriter. Journalist. Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:11:27 +0000 hourly 1 By: Ryan Peter https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/#comment-296 Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:11:27 +0000 http://ryanpeterblogs.wordpress.com/?p=171#comment-296 LOL 🙂 Thanks for the encouragement Nolan 🙂 Will check out those resources. Really appreciate it! 🙂

]]> By: Nolan Beudeker https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/#comment-295 Wed, 10 Feb 2010 07:39:05 +0000 http://ryanpeterblogs.wordpress.com/?p=171#comment-295 Hey again!

I too have been criticised for wordiness. Two resources I have found very useful are Strunk and White’s The Elements of Style, and Bryson’s Dictionary for Writers and Editors.

Don’t give up!

]]> By: Ryan Peter https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/#comment-294 Tue, 09 Feb 2010 08:21:46 +0000 http://ryanpeterblogs.wordpress.com/?p=171#comment-294 Ha ha, lol. Thanks man 🙂 🙂

]]> By: Bro https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/#comment-293 Tue, 09 Feb 2010 08:07:46 +0000 http://ryanpeterblogs.wordpress.com/?p=171#comment-293 I mean, AN epic…

]]> By: Bro https://ryanpeterwrites.com/2010/02/09/assessment-for-twins-at-war-arrived/#comment-292 Tue, 09 Feb 2010 08:06:48 +0000 http://ryanpeterblogs.wordpress.com/?p=171#comment-292 Hang in there… by the time you are done with it, it would have become and epic!

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